First Short story

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This is the first short story I have written. It may seem a little cliche in its content but I believe it is good. Please have a read and feel free to comment below! I hope you enjoy it.

https://1drv.ms/b/s!Aidr1QSfX3WwnT74XZvrNfAoR7Bx

Kind Regards
Oskar Roux

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  1. Anonymous7 July 2021 at 14:13

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    1. Anonymous7 July 2021 at 14:16

      Honestly, I enjoyed this quite a bit. The pacing is absolutely stunning and you had me in the grips of everything Islah was feeling. I did enjoy the slight storyline branch, and I like both endings. I really look forward to reading more short stories and more of the blog too. (reposted minus the typos)

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    2. Oskar Roux's Rambles in shambles7 July 2021 at 14:42

      WOW! Thank you so much for those kind words and feedback. I truly appreciate that amazing compliment. Its truly a challenge for me to look at my work and see the highlights and the setbacks too, so its nice to receive these comments. thank you!

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